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One sunny day I saw stork flying through the sky carrying babies and cute animals.The sky was light blue like an ocean. We went back up to the sky and watched the cotton candy clouds making cutest animals. I saw a really cutest puppy it had chubby cheek and big brown eye. The storks carry the puppy all the way to his new kennel.
There was a big sad lonely cloud. He made some bad animals. He made a crocodile, a hedgehog and a goat. The lonely cloud was about to make a shark.I got really angry at the stork . I was crying out loud because the stork went to the cotton candy cloud to get some protection.
Talofa Shanarnia, Wow I really enjoyed your story especially how you are using paragraphs. Your use of descriptive words was very cool, I love the part "I saw a really cutest puppy it had chubby cheek and big brown eye." This really reminded me of my dog. What is your focus at the moment for your writing?
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog Mr Maddren. At the moment my focus is using paragraphs. How old is your dog? Does your dog like running.
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