WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.
- Describe the setting in detail.Think about words to describe the situation, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
- Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the crew or one of the robots. How you are feeling when the boat is invaded by pirates.
One day I was in a old boat sailing across the sea, I was drinking my coffee then I saw people coming towards me.They were on a small boat they grabbed a humongous heavy anchor they put it on the boat.The bad guy said to the captain give me the key and the captain gave the key to the bad guy. They were grabbing my people then they went to the big container to looking for the robots. The robots came out of the container to rescue us, there were lots of robots attacking the bad guys.
Hi Shanarnia it is Sophia remember to read your post before you post it because I can see that there is a sentence that does not make sence. I am going to let you figger out what and where that mistake is.
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