I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In the Super Readers we have been making a model about bees. We have been reading a book called the buzz of the bees. I have lean't that bees can collect nectar from flowers.
Hi Shanarnia, I really loved your video but maybe next time make sure that your blog post makes sense because at the top you wrote "lean't" instead of 'learnt'. But other then that make sure that you re read your post before you publish it.
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Hi Shanarnia,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your video but maybe next time make sure that your blog post makes sense because at the top you wrote "lean't" instead of 'learnt'. But other then that make sure that you re read your post before you publish it.
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DeleteThank you Tasharn for comment on my blog. I like your feedback and I will fix's my mistakes and re read my blog post.
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