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Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Spencer park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.


Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
  • I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
  • The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
  • Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
  • A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report  
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Spencer park


Last week our class room went to Spencer park and we play on the playground and went on the walk and we learn about the Lagoon walk  on the beach and i was happy to go to Spencer park. I went with my mum in the car.


First my group was playing on the playground it was a nice day at Spencer park. I play on the flying fox and on the field.


Next my group went on the beach and we pick up some stick and shell and I took off my shoe and I dip my feet in the water and luck.

Last we learnt about the spider nest because it need to protect they on family.
The teachers for our group, Whea Heather and Mrs Scott chose a spot to put our bags down. We opened our plastic bags from our bag and wrote our name. After the teachers told us the instructions

we set out to find a driftwood and 10 other sea treasures. When I set out to find the sea treasures I found 15 sea shells and a driftwood. While looking for some sea treasures some of the people found a Blue Bottle Jellyfish. We learnt not to touch the Blue Bottle Jellyfish because it can sting you. After

looking at the sea treasures we had Morning Tea. Some people finished Morning Tea earlier so we had to play at the sand near the sea. Some people made sandcastles, caves and other things.

1 comment:

  1. You have some great information in this report Shanarnia. Is the grey part of the report meant to be there? It looks like you may have copied this from someone else by accident? I like the way that you told me what you learnt about spider nests on your trip.

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