The present.

In the past weeks our class (Ako Ngatahi) were writing a short story about a video titled “The Present”. It was a story about a boy who got a present and it was a puppy. After he discovered that the puppy only had three legs.

Here is the video, I assume that you might enjoy the video and maybe my writing too bye!

“The Present”

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

The present.

When mum give me a dog in the  box  it had  three leg I was playing on my PlayStation 4  I kick the dog away and it run into the Cupboard and  it find a red ball  under the cupboard and my dog give me the ball and he wanted to  play outside with me and when i Notice that's the dog had three leg and he notice  that i had one leg and who am i feel so sad and lonely i didn't know that I feel so angry.