My worst day ever (draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

                  My Worst day ever.

It is a sunny day in the African Savannah and I'm very

Excited because in my new place my papa and my mama are the biggest buffalo ever. I’m just a calf but one day I'm gonna be a big buffalo and I’m always safe with my dad.

It was a sunny day in the African Savannah and I felt warm from the sun. I could see some delicious buffalo walking along the river. Yum I see some lunch! I heard my lion friend starting to roar and then we chased the buffalo. I grabbed a baby calf by the body with my sharp teeth and sharp claws.  They caught  the baby calf