I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Sharnarnia I like your slide you made and put facts about difrent kind of sea creatures. These are really cool facts maybe you could of made the words a little bigger my favourite sea creature is a dholphin theres lots of creatures in difrent zones anyways bye.
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Hi Shanarnia it is Makenzie I love your post but maybe you could put more words. and you can maybe make the words biger the words are to small to see.
ReplyDeleteHi Sharnarnia I like your slide you made and put facts about difrent kind of sea creatures. These are really cool facts maybe you could of made the words a little bigger my favourite sea creature is a dholphin theres lots of creatures in difrent zones anyways bye.
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