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Friday, September 15, 2017

Adventures are the pits.

One terrible day I was at McDonald's, I felt anxious and terrified.  I had goosebumps it hurts so bad it felt like I was going to cry but I held my tears. I didn’t want to go down the scary slide.            

I went down the scary slide. I fell into the ball pit it was pitch dark. The ball thudded on my head hard and it hurt so bad. The ball hit my head. I had a sticky lollipop on my icky face. I tried to rip the lollipop off my face.There was a skeleton at the bottom of the ball pit.

I nearly fell off the edge of the ball pit. I keep climbing up and falling down. This stinky plaster landed on my face. I tried my best to climb back up and this sticky lollipop  helped me climb back up. I ate the purple sticky lollipop.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Shanarnia , I really like your slideshow about the zones of the ocean. The reason I love your slideshow is because you have heaps of writing and it is actually true.

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