Creative writing about happier

Today was my birthday I had all my friends and family at my big cool house. My pretty Aunty came and give me my yummy cake.This is going to be my first time to blow my yummy cake.But my friend came and blow my yummy cake. I was so upset. They were jumping up and down. Screaming so loud I can hear them from the dinner room. My papa give me a small present that had a yellow bow.Then my papa got me a cute puppy.Mello was growing and growing. When my Mello was going
I taught him to play football. I'm so happy to play football for my school.The photo guy said to me to smile but I didn't want to slime. He said come on please smile. I smile but the girls were laughing at me. I ran away from school. When I got home I sat on the chair. But Mello was scratching the door. I got up and opening the door. He was sick When I open the door. Then the next day he was laying on the floor and he was really sick so we took him to the vet.

The vet people took my dog and took him to this scary room.I was crying when my dog left.I couldn't stop crying. When I was older I had a daughter and it was her birthday and she got the same presents as me when I was young like her. The memories started coming back to when I was young like her.